This is a quality blog comment because I have started with a greeting and then I included the author’s name. I also complimented Dakbai on his water cycle explanation. I made a connection and shared about our writing too and how much we enjoyed it too. I ask a question about his water cycle. I have proofread my comment and I fixed up all the mistakes and fixed up the spelling. I used more words than exclamation marks.
I am a Year 6 student at Ruapotaka School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Miss Ginders.
Tuesday, 4 August 2015
A Quality Comment
Labels:
blog comment,
Cybersmart,
smart footprint,
smart relationships
Friday, 31 July 2015
My Goals For Term 3
These are my goals for term 3.
Wednesday, 1 July 2015
My Reflections on Term 2
This term I enjoyed doing badminton, art, environmental issues inquiry work and learning how to do a blog post. Next term I want to achieve some better learning habits with my work and ask for more help when I need it. I am concentrating on my work more instead of talking to other people. I am very happy with how I'm working.
Friday, 12 June 2015
Fifa world cup
If you want to read my article hereTuesday, 9 June 2015
My water cycle explanation
How does the water cycle work?
The rain comes from clouds to the ground. Then the sun comes and makes the water evaporate from the ground into the air. The water that has evaporated from the ground is now in the air and turns into little droplets of water. Now that they are little light droplets they now get turned into clouds. Now it is a cloud it makes a big cloud and little drops of water comes out of the big cloud. They now go everywhere where it is raining like the city, jungles, oceans and waterfalls.
Tuesday, 2 June 2015
Smart strong passwords
We have been learning to create a strong password and make sure our Google account is secure.
1. Make sure when you go to a computer that is not yours sign out before you go away or someone might
look at your things and they can know what you are doing and know your email address.
2. Make sure that you make a strong password, if you do an easy password a robber might hack into your account.
3 Don't do your pet name, address and your family name because it is easy to hack in to your email address.
1. Make sure when you go to a computer that is not yours sign out before you go away or someone might
look at your things and they can know what you are doing and know your email address.
2. Make sure that you make a strong password, if you do an easy password a robber might hack into your account.
3 Don't do your pet name, address and your family name because it is easy to hack in to your email address.
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