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Wednesday 12 August 2015

The Safety Show

               

Ronald McDonald came to Ruapotaka school. He told us about keeping safe when we are crossing the road. He said, “stop look and listen before you cross the road.” He did a play about his missing sock and told us to keep safe when we are crossing the road or passing a sneaky driveway. Ronald McDonald sings two songs, ‘make it click’ and ‘stop look and listen before you cross the road’.

Ronald McDonald found his sock.

Tuesday 4 August 2015

A Quality Comment


This is a quality blog comment because I have started with a greeting and then I included the author’s name. I also complimented Dakbai on his water cycle explanation. I made a connection and shared about our writing too and how much we enjoyed it too. I ask a question about his water cycle. I have proofread my comment and I fixed up all the mistakes and fixed up the spelling. I used more words than exclamation marks.